This was reviewed by a 17 year old Media Student who had said " The thriller opening had the quality of a potential film in the making and that it had made her feel like she was actually in the film, also the lighting and atmosphere it had created are sufficient as it shows the idea behind the storyline, also hints at a darker meaning within the story-line". The student also said , " The camera angles also show the difference between the main protagonist and the other characters as the over the shoulder shot shows the power of the main protagonist".
Despite this the student had also said, "The story-line is sort of predictable as although there is tension it still does not mean that you can not predict what is going to happen later on in the story-line, this I think limits your thriller opening but it still is gripping." The ending also ruins the title sequence as the logo and background do not match the genre of the thriller opening. This is because it is very simple and also the background to the logo being clouds , it also suggests a different message about the film.
While reviewing the feedback from the student we wanted to change somethings because of the story-line being predictable and creating atmosphere. We changed the story-line so it was less predictable, we did this by making sure that there was an atmosphere which everyone watching the film could relate to it. We also decided to add in close ups and mid-shot of the characters to show the power, the strength and each of them. This shows the audience that there is more to the story-line and that something mysterious is happening. We also changed the logo and background by changing the title Torment and making it mysterious by slowly introducing the logo onto a black background. It also shows the difference between between light and dark.
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Despite this the student had also said, "The story-line is sort of predictable as although there is tension it still does not mean that you can not predict what is going to happen later on in the story-line, this I think limits your thriller opening but it still is gripping." The ending also ruins the title sequence as the logo and background do not match the genre of the thriller opening. This is because it is very simple and also the background to the logo being clouds , it also suggests a different message about the film.
While reviewing the feedback from the student we wanted to change somethings because of the story-line being predictable and creating atmosphere. We changed the story-line so it was less predictable, we did this by making sure that there was an atmosphere which everyone watching the film could relate to it. We also decided to add in close ups and mid-shot of the characters to show the power, the strength and each of them. This shows the audience that there is more to the story-line and that something mysterious is happening. We also changed the logo and background by changing the title Torment and making it mysterious by slowly introducing the logo onto a black background. It also shows the difference between between light and dark.
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